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wise2013

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An article about bowling need your advice
« on: September 20, 2015, 08:30:20 PM »
Hello, everyone! Recently, I wrote an article about how to bowl & bowling tips (http://ikeephealthy.com/how-to-bowl-step-by-step/). I know, bowling is a popular sport. There are many bowling beginners need advice. So I write this article for helping these people. :D However, I think this article is not good enough, I need some advice for improving this article. If you guys have some useful advice, please write down. If your advice is good for the article, I will add it into the article with your name. :D

 

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Re: An article about bowling need your advice
« Reply #1 on: September 20, 2015, 10:05:39 PM »
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wise2013

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Re: An article about bowling need your advice
« Reply #2 on: September 21, 2015, 03:25:55 AM »
Yes, my website is a new site. But I just want some advice for my article for improving its quality. If you are worried about the risk of the personal information, you can leave your tips in anonymous way.

itsallaboutme

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Re: An article about bowling need your advice
« Reply #3 on: September 21, 2015, 05:18:53 AM »
My advice is to take the article off your website and keep the writing to subjects of which you have some knowledge.