http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kOBh5rguM1c
please only positive critisism please.
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Im so glad people are brainwashed to thinking that if they buy a new ball they will carry everything. And its even funnier when im carrying with my 15 year old ball and they're going flat ten.

Just a few things I noticed.

You tend to get a bit of a figure eight style backswing, I do believe if you would move the ball a little more to the right on your pushaway this would be eliminated.

Also your follow through seems a little weak, I would suggest working on getting it to follow the intended path of the ball, have your arm lift straight up going in a path at your target, for example http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zvFWUtpBuUA
Watch Kevin (our own fiveseventen) and his follow through, his is a great one to model after.

Besides those two things you look a little off at the line, a little more knee bend a possibly a little slower on the feet could solve this.

Overall though, it doesn't look bad, its just a few minor things to work with and tweak, it takes time but you'll get there.
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looks like you've got good rhythm which is always good
just a couple things i noticed:
-your left arm comes away from your body, keep it out in front until you reach the top of backswing this will let your shoulders open better.
-power step is a bit slow, keep it short and quick
-timing is a little late for your style, you need to get the ball into the swing just a bit earlier, try pushing out down a bit instead of straight out
-wrist during release looks stiff, cup your wrist approaching the release then relax it or bend it back (depends which way of thinking u like best)and remember to keep your elbow close to your body and follow through towards the target
Good luck,
Mike
 


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Michael Makela
Thunder Bay, Ontario Canada

www.mjbt.org

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Thanks everyone, once i watched the vid, i was thinking most of the things you are suggesting. Keep them coming, trying to compile a list for my practice tomorrow.
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Im so glad people are brainwashed to thinking that if they buy a new ball they will carry everything. And its even funnier when im carrying with my 15 year old ball and they're going flat ten.