for 1 year you are doing awesome!
with 1 shot it is a bit tough to tell much about your game.
You seem to have good balance which is good and follow through.
I think it would help if you could get closer to the line.  I'd agree with the previous post that you are a good 2 feet back.  Its ok if the lanes are really oily and u need some help to make the ball hook, but something that is not recommended for your normal shot.
But for a first year you are doing exceptionally well.  You have nice timing, don't force the ball and post up nice at the line.

For your equipment get some cleaner to help maintain your ball reaction.
Still, you are doing fantastic for a beginner!  Keep it up and keep practicing!
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Brandon Riley

Edited on 1/10/2007 2:46 AM