I would look to get a little deeper knee bend. Also, try not to be so erratic on your follow through because you are occasionally making yourself off balance at the line because you're try to put too much on it at the release.
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crusher,

Not bad at all.  However, you muscle your swing quite a bit.  Relax the armswing and focus on staying down and letting gravity take over the armswing. Also, want to practice on finishing your armswing with your arm over your right shoulder.  Looks like you try to hard to make the ball hook when the ball is already designed to hook for you.  Let the ball do the work.  But, overall, not bad.  Keep practicing!!!
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Steven Vance
Pro Shop Operator
Striking Results Pro Shop
Red Carpet Lanes
Duluth (NE Atlanta), Georgia

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