It appears that you have a very solid game/foundation and have potential to bowl at a high level.
The things that I noticed and personally feel need some attention.
Push away is directed out to the right this lateral movement requires some level of muscle to control. This makes you more susceptible to errant shots. A more natural and less managed swing plane would probably serve you well. Errors made in the pushaway are often magnified in the result.
Your posture at the point of release is a bit forward caused from excess bending at the waist. This forces your swing to be steeper and shortens the flat spot which often will cause a bowler to have an early release or grab it at the bottom.
The only other thing I can say is if I were one of the prospective universities that received this it would have been nice to see you use different parts of the lane to show some versatility. The main reason I say that is you walk straight in you first 3 steps and then turn to get into alignment with the intended ball path in your last 2. This leaves me wondering is that direction change ingrained into your muscle memory enough that it creeps in sometimes when it would cause problems.
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