Generally I think it looks pretty good.
More knee bend, as previously mentioned wouldn't hurt, also depending on how adjustable your timing is, I would suggest a shorter penultimate step. At the minute this step looks rushed.
You could also stand to arrive at the line a little later to give you a little more ball speed. This should be relatively easily accomplished by a slightly more prominent pushaway.
What issues do you think you have? Because we don't know you or your game as well as an actual coach would, as much info as possible is good so we can give better suggestions.
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