yes, from what i can see, ur rev and power on the video is more than enough
very smooth
getting low on the third step is usual, however to be consistent i believe u should keep that angle till u release the ball
i think right now theres not big issues to correct on ur approach
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When a house bowler misses the mark, misses the break point and strike, for many ppl its called a wallshot. When a pro does that its call adjustment
When a house bowler gets his finger stuck in the ball and fall on the lanes, for many ppl its called lame bowler. When a pro does that its called the Machuga flop! ha i like this one.