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splendorlex

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My First Video, please critique!
« on: December 26, 2006, 03:03:50 PM »
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If you aren't watching 'The Wire,' the government should be forced to come to your house and repossess your television. END OF STORY!

Mr. Lebowski, this is Bill Salnicker with the Southern Cal Bowling League, and I just got a, an informal report, that a member of your team, uh, Walter Sobchak, drew a firearm during league play. If this is true of course, it contravenes a number of the league's by-laws, and article 27 of the league...

BOB:  Did you see the way she was lookin' at me?
DOUG:  Yeah, because she thought you were some kind of freak!

 

BrunsMike

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Re: My First Video, please critique!
« Reply #16 on: December 27, 2006, 09:42:50 PM »
Hey Ryan, glad to see you posted a video. From the last time I saw your style you look alot more smoother, relaxed, and I see you to are playing the outside shot 13-7/4ish. You everything has already been said to help you, all i can do is agree. Great work and keep up the good work your doing.
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splendorlex

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Re: My First Video, please critique!
« Reply #17 on: December 28, 2006, 11:46:36 AM »
Thanks all, I got a lot of good pointers from this.  I'm going to work on trying to keep my hand behind the ball (even I can see how how I'm almost "suitcasing" the ball), my timing and my knee bend.  It always helps to have fresh eyes look at something.  Overall, I'm pretty happy with my progression.
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If you aren't watching 'The Wire,' the government should be forced to come to your house and repossess your television. END OF STORY!

Mr. Lebowski, this is Bill Salnicker with the Southern Cal Bowling League, and I just got a, an informal report, that a member of your team, uh, Walter Sobchak, drew a firearm during league play. If this is true of course, it contravenes a number of the league's by-laws, and article 27 of the league...

BOB:  Did you see the way she was lookin' at me?
DOUG:  Yeah, because she thought you were some kind of freak!

splendorlex

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Re: My First Video, please critique!
« Reply #18 on: December 29, 2006, 08:42:11 AM »
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If you aren't watching 'The Wire,' the government should be forced to come to your house and repossess your television. END OF STORY!

Mr. Lebowski, this is Bill Salnicker with the Southern Cal Bowling League, and I just got a, an informal report, that a member of your team, uh, Walter Sobchak, drew a firearm during league play. If this is true of course, it contravenes a number of the league's by-laws, and article 27 of the league...

BOB:  Did you see the way she was lookin' at me?
DOUG:  Yeah, because she thought you were some kind of freak!