Bowlers Alley Nick, what exactly are you showing us here,
if its a preview of a site design, its a bit sparse.
You some content, even if its just gobble-de-gook.
Currently you just have a banner, which is ok, but I think its a bit too big, though this impression may change if content was filling the vast expanse below it.
You have this gradient white area below, I presume this will be the starting point for the textual content, whill it fade like that, or will it be a solid area, because you could have a real bad problem with text colours, just something to think about.
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MonkeyBoy